Subject: CV Review Request
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am reaching out for your valuable feedback on my CV. While I am confident in its content, some of my acquaintances suggest that I should only highlight my MBA in HR (London) rather than including my MBA in Marketing. Additionally, I have been encountering challenges during interviews.
Hi, I am Sohail. I am interested in the position of Human Resource . Please find my CV attached for your perusal.
Education:
London College Of Business Management & Computing
Specialization: Human Resource (UK- London)
Grade: A
Work Experience:
- Senior Human Resource Executive at FORWARD INNOVATIONS (UK - London)
Responsibilities:
- Conducting interviews and employee screening
- Handling employee payroll disputes
- Performance appraisal oversight
- Coordinating with recruitment agencies for staff hiring
- Managing new and departing employees' formalities
Duration: Dec 2005 to Sep 2007
Currently employed at:
Sigrun Group of Companies as an Executive HR.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to any insights you may have.
Sohail
9820462353
From India, Mumbai
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am reaching out for your valuable feedback on my CV. While I am confident in its content, some of my acquaintances suggest that I should only highlight my MBA in HR (London) rather than including my MBA in Marketing. Additionally, I have been encountering challenges during interviews.
Hi, I am Sohail. I am interested in the position of Human Resource . Please find my CV attached for your perusal.
Education:
London College Of Business Management & Computing
Specialization: Human Resource (UK- London)
Grade: A
Work Experience:
- Senior Human Resource Executive at FORWARD INNOVATIONS (UK - London)
Responsibilities:
- Conducting interviews and employee screening
- Handling employee payroll disputes
- Performance appraisal oversight
- Coordinating with recruitment agencies for staff hiring
- Managing new and departing employees' formalities
Duration: Dec 2005 to Sep 2007
Currently employed at:
Sigrun Group of Companies as an Executive HR.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to any insights you may have.
Sohail
9820462353
From India, Mumbai
Dear Mr. Sohail,
Hi!
According to me, your CV has the following points to consider:
1) Your date of passing the given education is not mentioned.
2) As per the CV format, one should always mention the time period they have worked in a particular organization at the top, after the name of the company and not at the end.
Regards,
Ankit
09869851356
From India, Mumbai
Hi!
According to me, your CV has the following points to consider:
1) Your date of passing the given education is not mentioned.
2) As per the CV format, one should always mention the time period they have worked in a particular organization at the top, after the name of the company and not at the end.
Regards,
Ankit
09869851356
From India, Mumbai
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