Seeking Honest Feedback: Should I Highlight My HR MBA Over Marketing in My CV?

Subject: CV Review Request

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am reaching out for your valuable feedback on my CV. While I am confident in its content, some of my acquaintances suggest that I should only highlight my MBA in HR (London) rather than including my MBA in Marketing. Additionally, I have been encountering challenges during interviews.

Hi, I am Sohail. I am interested in the position of Human Resource . Please find my CV attached for your perusal.

Education:
London College Of Business Management & Computing
Specialization: Human Resource (UK- London)
Grade: A

Work Experience:
- Senior Human Resource Executive at FORWARD INNOVATIONS (UK - London)
Responsibilities:
- Conducting interviews and employee screening
- Handling employee payroll disputes
- Performance appraisal oversight
- Coordinating with recruitment agencies for staff hiring
- Managing new and departing employees' formalities
Duration: Dec 2005 to Sep 2007

Currently employed at:
Sigrun Group of Companies as an Executive HR.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to any insights you may have.

Sohail
9820462353

Dear Mr. Sohail,

Hi!

According to me, your CV has the following points to consider:

1) Your date of passing the given education is not mentioned.

2) As per the CV format, one should always mention the time period they have worked in a particular organization at the top, after the name of the company and not at the end.

Regards,
Ankit
09869851356