Dear Ankita
Now this, is a good start - "the difference between a draft to the CEO and Team Leader".
Business communication; as you may have realized now; is a bit different from friendly informal communication. The former are more formal; polite and generally in 'Third person'.
You can be more friendly with your TL, but with the CEO the tone of the letter should be formal, with minimum use of 'First person'.
(Although US business communication with CEO may be informal, as there is a trend of calling even the CEO by their First name or nick name).
Kindly put up your drafts here; and as DVD has suggested; we can suggest changes/corrections.
About "Spoon-feeding"; it is true that you"ll never "learn" anything this way. Can anyone teach another person 'swimming', without making him enter in the water ???
Please do not let negative feedback discourage/offend you, rather take advantage of them in correcting and improving yourself.
Also; do feel free to interact intensively with members; we are 'family' !!!!
Warm regards.
Now this, is a good start - "the difference between a draft to the CEO and Team Leader".
Business communication; as you may have realized now; is a bit different from friendly informal communication. The former are more formal; polite and generally in 'Third person'.
You can be more friendly with your TL, but with the CEO the tone of the letter should be formal, with minimum use of 'First person'.
(Although US business communication with CEO may be informal, as there is a trend of calling even the CEO by their First name or nick name).
Kindly put up your drafts here; and as DVD has suggested; we can suggest changes/corrections.
About "Spoon-feeding"; it is true that you"ll never "learn" anything this way. Can anyone teach another person 'swimming', without making him enter in the water ???
Please do not let negative feedback discourage/offend you, rather take advantage of them in correcting and improving yourself.
Also; do feel free to interact intensively with members; we are 'family' !!!!
Warm regards.