Hi Everyone, I have been asked to send a circular to employees announcing the Ayudha Pooja celebration. Please find the draft below and let me know if I need to make any touch-ups or changes to the wording. Kindly guide.
Ayudha Pooja Celebration Announcement
Dear All,
Wishing you a very Happy Ayudha Pooja in advance! We will be having the Ayudha Pooja celebration tomorrow at 5:00 pm. Looking forward to your presence on this joyous occasion!
Regards,
From India, Madras
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6Ayudha Pooja Celebration Announcement
Dear All,
Wishing you a very Happy Ayudha Pooja in advance! We will be having the Ayudha Pooja celebration tomorrow at 5:00 pm. Looking forward to your presence on this joyous occasion!
Regards,
From India, Madras
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It is fine.... go ahead. It is brief and crisp. Only mention "We will be..." as a separate sentence.
From India, Pune
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