Draft Of The News Letter - Doc Download

Hi friends,
I have herewith attached the draft of the news letter framed for our company...
Kindly go through it and let me know whether any improvisations are required.
Pls.....give ur feedback.........
Thanks
Sowmya

For a start the Newsletter appears good.
You may want to look at making the sections on new employees and employee birthdays and anniversary more personal. The reader should should know something about the person and for the person it is good platform to get recognized with something positive on the occasion.

Hi
Should I indicate the designation of the new employees....
If still any improvements are required.....kindly make the necessary changes and send the same to me...
Thanks
Sowmya

Dear Soumya,
Yes, I suggest that you must mention the designation of new joinees.
Let it be a transparent culture.
Regards
Bhavna
www.vinove.com

This could be planned as internal journal by collecting articles from Staffs and published 2 months once or 3 months once.
In fact, I tried to do like in my earlier organisation. But to be frank, with the work load we hava already, it is difficult to feed the information for New letter also. I am not discouring, but in long run, we should be able to deliver material .
All the best.
Krishnaraj P R

Hi Bhavana
I have indicated designations already in the news letter for the new joinees... Does it require further more improvisations...
If so, pls do the same in the draft and send it to me..
Kindly help me out...
Thanks
Sowmya

hi Sowmya,
I am also planning to launch a news letter for my organisation if you are still available please suggest/advice me how to go about it.
Regards
Jay