Seeking Feedback: Can You Spot Any Mistakes in My Resume for College Placements?

Hello everybody,

I am loading my resume for all of you. Please tell me if there are any mistakes or if there are any rectifications that you feel should be made to this resume. It's for the placement cell in my college, and I thought to give it a try.

Pratik :)

Hi Pratik,

I went through your resume and made certain changes:

- Your personal information should come at the end.
- The objective should be the first thing to look at, so try to make it clearer.
- Your qualifications could be presented in a different table format for easier tracking.
- You have labeled a section as "Summer Project" but mentioned your winter internship.
- Please note that under languages known, you have listed Bengali as "Bangla."
Please review your resume again. It seems you are involved in many finance-related activities.

Are you considering pursuing an MBA? Your experience in the field could give you an edge over others.

Neha

Thank you very much, Neha. I'll certainly look into your points, incorporate them, and make necessary corrections as well. Yes, I'll be pursuing an MBA with dual specialization in finance and marketing/HR. Thank you once again.

Regards, Pratik :)

I am currently engaged in a partnership meeting with CII for the next three days, so I will catch up with all of you later. Enjoy!

Hi, I am Madhankrishnan. I have just completed my MBA in HR from a business school and am currently looking for a job. Could anyone please help me in finding a good job? I am interested in working in the following cities: Chennai, Bangalore, Hyderabad, Pune, and Chandigarh. I have attached my resume for further consideration.