MY 7th POEM- "HEALTH". PLEASE READ + SHARE & KINDLY OBLIGE

Dear,
We All Know That "Health Is Wealth".
It Includes Body - Mind - Soul.
But We All Also Know That Entire World Is In Danger & It Is Getting Worse.
Hence I Wrote 7th Poem- "HEALTH" As Attached With This Post.
Please Read + Share & Kindly Oblige.
Thanks & Regards,
Chirag Saiya (Philosopher)
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Hi Chirag Saiya,

After I read the introduction of your thread, I was all agog with enthusiasm in the hope of reading a good poem. Unfortunately the contents of the poem are bizarre. With due respect to all the references that you have provided (beneath your signature), the poem is nauseating, to say the least.

The society is no doubt fret with all the evils as evinced in the many stanzas, but the language used is nothing short of raucous cacophony. The spirit of the message may be to shelve Materialism and imbibe Spirituality as a means of redemption. Yet, if someone were to read the poem alone (without the introduction that you have penned) one would be bewildered about the choice of words and manner in which the message is conveyed. Pessimism is abundantly oozing in many of the stanzas.

The rhyming ending of many successive lines in the stanzas, do not cover up for the poor choice of words preceding them. All the stanzas, save for the last one to some extent, have been consumed to describe the evils, while very little effort has been made to highlight the greatness of Spirituality.

V.Raghunathan