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Good day Professionals,i am 23 year old young man in possession of National Diploma in Hr coupled with 3 years experience in HR environment,currently volunteering in the Department of health.i have been working hard for this organization and i am sure that my service had a very significant impact in it,but still i cant be recommended .Please help with job opportunity.
attached herein is my CV.

Hi,
I just had a look at your CV and I recommend you to get your CV done by professional. Your CV is not appropriate according to your experience level and lots of unnecessary things are included in it.
Regards,

Hi,
Your CV has lots of mistakes and I think that is why you are not getting call for interview. It is overly decorated, unnecessary dated and the most important thing, your experience, which should be placed prominently, is placed at last.

No is not that much common,i did it because its more significant to have as an HR professional as i am.You should hire me then...lol.