Hi Trupti,
there is creativity in the presentation. take my comments in a true spirit.
1. the flow of contents - you starts with Kaizen and link to 5 S is good. by linking Deming circle in the middle of presentation was misleading from the topic. flow is distracting. you could have started with PDCA cycle, linking to TQM or continual improvement, take examples of kaizen, 5s, etc as a tool to accomplish small group activities or improvement process, and then go on 5 S principles.
2. animations / pictures - again a creativity in developing deming cycle with PDCA and SDCA. as per as my knowledge is concerned, PDCA is also refered as PDSA, i.e instead of check some use the word study. these are not two different types. it is the same and known as deming circle. same is being repeated in the next slide as graph with alternate circles. did you mean here, use PDCA for improvement and SDCA for sustainance.
3. examples to describe the concept - it is a fact, that many of us loose the grip on the topic by trying to make the audience impressed with pictures / examples. you could have used simple exapmles, which are related to the workplace. the best examples can come from our homes, which are very easy to understand. for seiri, you give example of respiratoty system, which is a process waste. you can sort out (organize). same way for seiton, the picture does not suit to your earlier explanation for easy to see, easy to pick, etc.
nandish