Hi Trupti,
There is creativity in the presentation. Take my comments in a true spirit.
1. The flow of contents - you start with Kaizen and link to 5 S is good. By linking the Deming circle in the middle of the presentation, it was misleading from the topic. The flow is distracting. You could have started with the PDCA cycle, linking to TQM or continual improvement, taking examples of kaizen, 5S, etc., as tools to accomplish small group activities or the improvement process, and then move on to the 5S principles.
2. Animations/pictures - again, a creative approach in developing the Deming cycle with PDCA and SDCA. As far as my knowledge is concerned, PDCA is also referred to as PDSA, i.e., instead of check, some use the word study. These are not two different types; it is the same and known as the Deming circle. The same concept is repeated in the next slide as a graph with alternate circles. Did you mean to use PDCA for improvement and SDCA for sustenance here?
3. Examples to describe the concept - it is a fact that many of us lose the grip on the topic by trying to impress the audience with pictures/examples. You could have used simple examples related to the workplace. The best examples can come from our homes, which are very easy to understand. For seiri, you give an example of the respiratory system, which is a process waste. You can sort out (organize). Similarly, for seiton, the picture does not suit your earlier explanation for easy to see, easy to pick, etc.
Nandish