While I appreciate your interest and passion, you should keep in mind the participants and the time available for doing this presentation. I feel you have included too many things in one PowerPoint, and the time may be a constraint for this.
Suggestions for Effective Presentations
Another suggestion would be to let the language be crisp and short. It should contain the bare essentials. Crowding too many things in a participant's head is not a good thing to do. Furthermore, a trainer has to be very clear about the topic of delivery, know it well, and the way it is told should arrest the attention of the participants. Each slide should preferably include six lines of bullet points. This is necessary so that a person sitting in the last bench can see and read what is there in a particular slide.
Wish you all the best,
Regards,
M.J. Subramanyam, Mumbai