Hi Sudhir,
Your attempt is laudable.But you say time management is important but you appear to have not followed it here.There are certain slides which are incomplete. And they are too lengthy. You have a wish to tell all you know in one go!! A trainer would be guided by what the participants require than what the trainer knows.
If I want to catch a fish, and If I put chocolates (which I like) into the hook and put it under water, no fish will come. I must put what the fish likes - the earthworms - then only fish will come eat it and get entangled. Participants are very important for a trainer and you must know the time available for you to do the presentation and segregate important and essential from unimportant and non-essential things.Only the former should be given to them. A lot of home work needs to be done before we attempt a ppt.
Hope you will take all these in positive frame of mind. All these suggestions are for your consumption and improvement.
M.J. SUBRAMANYAM, MUMBAI