Dear Chiragi,
A really good effort. However, you would do well to pay attention to what Saleena has said.
Actually, I am tempted to ask how old are you? What is your occupation? And how and where you intend to use this presentation?
Then, it may be possible to give you a candid evaluation.
Communications skills is a very wide subject - no, a very vast topic.
For example, as Corporate Trainer and Management Consultant, I have given some original treatment to this topic covering it from 6 perspectives.
It required intensive and extensive research for many months.
You will appreciate, that for people of my profession it is very important to learn to communicate effectively. It is my experience that how the PPT content is explained and links established is more important than what a PPT slide contains.
Of course, aesthetic presentation, rich content, proper sequencing and structuring, punctuation and grammar are basic attributes of a good presentation. But it has to be supported by excellent delivery replete with examples relevant to the needs and background of the participants.
You have done a good job. Kindly accept my felicitations.
Regards,
Sunil Chandra
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