Revising A Memo To Improve Positive Emphasis

fateema.anwar
Subject: Status of College Internship Program
I’ve made great progress on the college internship program for our company. Though the program isn’t yet ready for implementation, I can’t believe I’m far from making it so.
To date, I’ve drafted a plan for the program, contacted several HR managers at comparable companies about their programs, and established a proposed budget for the program.
I’d be further along, but Rob made a mistake when he contacted State University about the program. He accidentally indicated the program would begin in 2007, but the year is actually 2008. It was a silly mistake but not a fatal one.
I wouldn’t worry about this error, as it shouldn’t be a problem to fix it.
If you have any questions about the program, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
fateema.anwar
this memo have alot of mistakes. i want your help to improve this memo in "positive emphasis" form
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