How Should I Announce Our Ayudha Pooja Celebration to Employees? Need Feedback!

premahr

Hi Everyone, I have been asked to send a circular to employees announcing the Ayudha Pooja celebration. Please find the draft below and let me know if I need to make any touch-ups or changes to the wording. Kindly guide.

Ayudha Pooja Celebration Announcement

Dear All,

Wishing you a very Happy Ayudha Pooja in advance! We will be having the Ayudha Pooja celebration tomorrow at 5:00 pm. Looking forward to your presence on this joyous occasion!

Regards,

Gianim23

It is fine to proceed as the message is brief and concise. Please include "We will be..." as a standalone sentence.

gayathri.kankipati

Great! In the future, consider including some pictures and making the email more colorful so that it can reach a wider audience compared to the previous one, which was simpler! 

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