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Can I suggest my boss for an employee satisfaction survey as I handle the Nasik branch alone, and my seniors work at the Punjab branch while our main boss is in Bangalore? He is coming to meet me during my probation period for the first time. During this period, I am planning to show him all my work activities as well as make suggestions through a presentation. Is it fine? Also, please advise on what else I can do to showcase my abilities more effectively.
Can I suggest my boss for an employee satisfaction survey as I handle the Nasik branch alone, and my seniors work at the Punjab branch while our main boss is in Bangalore? He is coming to meet me during my probation period for the first time. During this period, I am planning to show him all my work activities as well as make suggestions through a presentation. Is it fine? Also, please advise on what else I can do to showcase my abilities more effectively.