Asking For The Format Of A Letter To Revise The Salary

Hello,
I have joined a software company 3 months back. i have been promised to revise my salary but yet there is not such any revision have been made. Please help me to write a mail about this. Please send me a format.
I am waiting for ur reply.
Thank you.

Dear Friend.,
Don't go straightway of what has been committed to you three months back. Please put your strong area and your achievements. Please also highlight you weak area on day one and how you have been successful making themas your strong one and then request for your rise. Good Sense of Boss will surely prevail. what you want.Bosses looks for quality of performance.