Hi Arpee,
The presentation is fabulous! The cat crossing the road is too good. You may consider the following points for improvement:
1. The confidence cycle may be shown as a vicious circle - it rebuilds itself.
2. The title of slide 4 may be "Self Esteem" or "You Are What You Think You Are" or something similar.
3. Slides 6 and 7, which outline the cycle of self-confidence, should come before the body language slides because body language is one of the steps of the cycle.
4. Slides 6 and 7 could be combined into one to illustrate how positive thinking breeds positive results and vice versa. You have lots of comments on these slides - these could be visually represented in a few slides.
5. Slide 9 should be the final slide - it provides a grand ending to your presentation, and people will remember it for a long time.
Best of luck,
Arun