Crafting Professional Punch Lines for a New Recruitment Business

Hello Everybody,

My company is coming up with a new recruitment business, so can anyone suggest some professional "PUNCH LINE"? Your help would be highly appreciated.

Regards,
Leena

Hi,

I suggest the following punch lines for your consideration:

(1) Solution for businesses
(2) Recruitment boss
(3) Perfect placement
(4) Placement solutions
(5) Management of people

These punch lines could be effective in conveying the intended message. Let me know if you need further assistance or modifications.

Hi Leena,

I suggest, "Your Recruitment is our Commitment." It does not matter whether you are a fresher or experienced.

Dear Leena,

Greetings from TimesJobs.com!

I am representing TimesJobs.com, a recruitment portal and a group company of "Times of India". Today, with more than 1.2 crore candidate profiles and a user-friendly Search Engine Optimization, we are looking to establish a business relationship with an esteemed client like you.

We are here to support you in your recruitment process "because you are worth more".

If this sounds good to you, you can call me on 09958829966. Otherwise, I apologize if this email does not align with the nature of your business.

Thank you for taking the time to read this message.

Kind regards, [Your Name]

You can write the following:

1. Talent Quotient services
2. Talent Hunt services
3. Bright Talent services

Regards,
Tarun

Hi,

A punchline is traditionally a simple yet effective single statement, not a lengthy story. Personally, I would suggest going with "katyanimk's" suggestion: "YOUR RECRUITMENT, OUR COMMITMENT" - a nice one as it emphasizes the core business.

Thank you.

Hi Leena,

It's really nice that so many people are helping you with the punchline. But before creating a punchline for any business, you should know WHO WILL BE YOUR TARGET CUSTOMER. Then, think along those lines. Consider how that punchline will impact them when they hear it.

Thank you.

1) "ALL IS WELL"
(Short and sweet meaning: All hard work pays well)

2) Combining People