Hi Shimit,
It is a brave effort to start with.
Here is my feedback, most of them are critical since you have asked for it..
Did you intend to do a project work or a research work? if its a Project Work, then its too descriptive in the first place and also has a lot of contents that are totally unrelated to the topic. If its supposed to be a Research Paper or Abstract then it is totally void of any direction or purpose.
A Research Abstract just cannot be " Employee Relations" ! Also you will need to specify the reason why you choose this topic ( which is nothing but the Objectives of your Research or Project) .
You seem to have taken a lot of content from the Internet which have not been acknowledged or inscribed anywhere in the document. Besides you also have a long way to go in managing your contents in the paper.....
This post will not be enough for my feedback ( and there is no word called "Feedbacks") ...hence I am cutting it short here.
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All the very Best Shimit!
Regards,
Girish.S.