Exploring the Gayatri Mantra: What Does Its English Translation Reveal About Enlightened Awareness?

Gayatri Mantra:

Om Bhur Bhuvah Svah
Tat Savitur Varenyam
Bhargo Devasya Dhimahi
Dhiyo Yonah Prachodayat

English Translation:

Throughout all of existence
"That" essential nature
illuminating existence is the
Adorable One.
May all beings perceive with subtle intellect
the magnificent brilliance of enlightened awareness.

Hi Vikram,

How about this translation in English:

Oh Creator of the Universe! We meditate upon your Supreme splendor. May your radiant power illuminate our intellects, destroy our sins, and guide us in the right direction!

Hope this is fine... Regards

The ideal translation is as follows:

Oh, the master of the universe,
glowing with your light's divine illumination,
I meditate upon you,
to activate and enlighten me.