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You could have searched the forum to get the draft. Anyway, you may check my following replies:
Take clue from the above posts, prepare draft on your own and if you wish upload on this forum. Some senior like me will correct it. By the way, your post merits feedback. There is no background information like where you work, in what capacity you work, how you are working etc. Secondly, words like "mom" are used in informal communication and have no place in formal communication. Lastly, you have written your post as if you were scribbling your thoughts on a scrapbook. There is no structure to your sentences. It is high time for you to learn principles of written communication.
16th January 2018 From India, Bangalore
#AnonymousSir, Thank you for the suggestions but I want to get the exact wordings for the mail.If I am good at writing mail I wont seek your help.Kindly help me to draft a convincing mail as this is very urgent.I will take your feedback positively and try to improve my language.
17th January 2018 From India, Bengaluru
19th January 2018 From India