Mera Bachpan Bas Mera Hai

sujeet_rajawat · #1 (**permalink**) 08-05-2008, 09:53 AM

Ek chota sa, nanha sa ladka tha main jin dinoon
Ek melay main pahuncha jhoom kar chalta hua.............

Ji machalta tha mera, Har kisi shay per magar
Jaib khali thi or mai kuch Kharid hi na saka........................

Lot aaya dil mai liye, hasratain main sainkaroon
Ek chota sa, nanha sa larka tha main jin dinoon..............................

Khair mehromioon kay wo din, toh ab chale gaye
Aaj mela laga phir laga hai, apni usi purani shaan sai......................

Aaj chahoon to Har Ek dukaan Kharid loon main
Aaj chahoon to sara jahan kharid loon main..............

Par ab dil mai mere wo andaaj dharka kahan?
Par ab woh chota sa, wo alhar sa larka kahan¡*¡*¡*¡*¡*¡*¡*¡*¡*¡*¡*¡*.

shreem · #2 (**permalink**) 08-05-2008, 11:37 AM

Great post Sujeet with a great message!

Really now we are able to buy each and every thing jo bachpan main hamari pahoonch se bahar thi but as you said "Par ab dil mai mere wo andaaj dharka kahan? Par ab woh chota sa, wo alhar sa larka kahan"

Best Regards
Shree

sujeet_rajawat · #3 (**permalink**) 08-05-2008, 01:59 PM

Hi Shree..

Thanks for your feedback...

As this is not only a poem but a story..a story with a lot of unexplored truths..

purohitravindrarc · #4 (**permalink**) 08-05-2008, 02:25 PM

Dear Sujeet

Really superb, i assume these are written by you

good one

reGARDS
rAVINDRA

sujeet_rajawat · #5 (**permalink**) 08-05-2008, 02:56 PM

Dear Ravindra

Thanks for your feedback....

ankurbhati · #6 (**permalink**) 08-05-2008, 11:16 PM

hmmm....
sujeet ji.... ur poems speaks a lot....
really good !!!
keep it up !

sujeet_rajawat · #7 (**permalink**) 09-05-2008, 04:51 PM

Ankur...

You are in best days of your life..as you are in collage............

I can say enjoy as much as you can...........coz after you move in professional life...you are going to miss them like anything...........

I am sharing you my experience.........

1234 · #8 (**permalink**) 29-05-2008, 12:36 PM

dear sujeet,

really superb poem...... touched my heart.......

keep it up boss!!!!!!!

regards
shruti

sujeet_rajawat · #9 (**permalink**) 29-05-2008, 05:00 PM

Dear Shruti

Thanks for great motivation....

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