Neither Spring nor Summer

Sonit · #1 (**permalink**) 21-03-2006, 10:17 AM

Hi all,
Please tell me how do you feel are these few lines that I have composed...

Neither Spring nor Summer beauty has such grace,
As I saw in your beautiful face...

Eyes your Beautiful eyes are love's brightest source,
Smile, your radiant smile is the world's driving force....
It seems you hold the world in your warm embrace....

Neither Spring nor Summer beauty has such grace,
As I saw in your beautiful face...

Your skin so white, so delicate...
You are fit to be washed with milk...
Either you are divine or I am crazy, whatever be the case...

Neither Spring nor Summer beauty has such grace,
As I saw in your beautiful face...

Sonit · #2 (**permalink**) 21-03-2006, 10:10 PM

Hey people,
Plz tell me how is my poem?
Thanks and regards

Pallavi · #3 (**permalink**) 22-03-2006, 11:38 AM

hi Sonit,

u really made that poem?
i thought it was a forward.

i liked it.. really good!

Cheers,
Pallavi

Sonit · #4 (**permalink**) 22-03-2006, 01:05 PM

Hi Pallavi,
Thanks for your feedback, Its reaaly nice of you.
I am not a full-to poet, its just tht sometimes the poet within wakes up...

, newaz will try post few other works in times to come.
Cheers,
Sonit Singh

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